Wednesday, August 17, 2011

ANOTHER CARL BRUSH REVIEW OF AN ANTHONY NEIL SMITH NOVEL

Hi folks,
Here's another Carl Brush review of Anthony Neil Smith's novel, HOGDOGGIN'. Jeez! Carl's like me. Once he gloms onto a writer, he can't rest until he reads everything the author has written! I'm the same way. In the last two weeks I've started reading John Gilstrap and went through everything he has out. Did the same with Smith, Joe R. Lansdaler and Chris Ewan. All in the last couple of weeks. This is truly the real GOLDEN AGE OF LITERATURE. I don't think there's ever been a time in history where there are so many great novels out there. I'm like a pig fell into a vat of sour cream--just flat-out gorging myself. Next up I want to read Linwood Barclay's new novel, then Harlan Coben's, then... so many! so little time! so cool to be living now!

Here's Carl's review. Sucks he compares HOGDOGGIN' to Shakespeare. He never compared ME to Shakespeare...

writer working
carl r brush
    As I stated in my piece on Anthony Neil Smith’s Yellow Medicine, the main goose that prodded me to download that book and Hogdoggin’ was Les Edgerton’s suggestion that they might give some notions re how to handle backstory in my The Second Vendetta--Recently finished and on the agent/publisher market, owing significantly to messrs Smith and Edgerton. If it ever comes time to compose that acknowledgements page, you’ll both appear. Like Les, I also promise to show up on your doorstep with beer and bourbon and, also like Les, I remind you that I write fiction.
   
But about Hogdoggin’ itself. We left Billy Lafitte at the end of Yellow Medicine   beat and lost but apparently not in danger of immediate arrest or death from the federal or local local law or from meth dealers or terrorists. When we last see him, he’s about to make a phone call, but we  we never see him pick up or hear a conversation. Twisting in the literary wind, is where we’re left.
    We find him up in Hogdoggin’ months later as the chief enforcer of a brutal motorcycle gang. You have to hand it to Smith. He’s not afraid to go over the top. The gang’s leader is a huge guy named Steel God. You can guess what he’s called for short. The little society is elemental and tribal. The king is old and sick, the natives are restless, and rebellion is brewing-- a movement to topple the ruler and raise a new one. Billy’s role is to protect the head guy as well as (some believe) to take his place should the rebellion succeed. A tangled web for Billy, who’s more of a direct action kind of guy not naturally built for political nuance.
    Then comes the phone call. Trouble involving the wife and two kids he’s left behind in New Orleans. Turns out Franklin Rome, the chief nemesis FBI agent from Yellow Medicine hasn’t been obeying federal orders to keep away from Billy. Rome hasn’t bothered the Minnesota case which got him in such hot water in the first place. Instead, he’s been trying to dig up old bones re Billy’s Gulf Port/Katrina days, and he’s been using Billy’s ex and kids to do it. Rome figures to not only extract incriminating info, but flush Billy out of hiding where he and Lafitte can go mano-a-mano and settle the blood feud that still churns through Rome’s gut and mind 24-7.
    The agent’s ploy works, though in ways and with consequences he never imagines. And we’re in for some surprises, too. One of the premises of noir appears to be that everyone’s a shit in at least one way or another, and that the shit will come out under stress. Another is, that no one gets what they’re looking for at least in the way they were expecting. Smith puts those principles in relief by giving virtually every significant character in the book his/her 5-15 pages of fame--at least one POV chapter. And he pulls it off the parade without interrupting the flow of the story or disturbing the fictive dream. You start to get to know, even like, someone, then they’re dead. C’est la dirty ol’ noir vie. Well done. Keeps the reader--at least this one--locomotivating through the book.
    But, you ask, or should, what about Billy? He’s much the same reckless, passionate lord of misrule he was in Yellow Medicine, but the ante here is up even higher. He’s got dark forces pursuing him from all sides and in ways even more dangerous. Count ‘em--1) The legit FBI; 2) the rogue FBI (Rome and a crew of misfits he’s gathered); 3) a pair of sheriff/FBI wannabes; 4) armed country huffers out on a spree; 5) Not to mention God and his girl. 6) and a mystery character you’ll absolutely love.I probably left out someone. Was ever anybody in more trouble than this?
    They tell you to put your protagonist into so much trouble even you don’t know how he’s going to get out of it. Smith does that. Question is, does he get him out of it? Take a look at the end, then tell me whether Billy survives. Maybe we should tweet the author some votes. There are some vague clues, but I hesitate to make too much out of them.
    One more thing. I opined at the end of my Yellow Medicine commentary that Franklin Rome was going to get his comeuppance in Hogdoggin’, Well, it’s clear he gets a comeuppance,  but in what form? Again, you tell me. It might be a hint that the author’s next book, Choke On your Lies, appears not to feature Billy, at least in the /Amazon peek I took. don’t know if Smith has a commitment problem--that’s between him and his therapist and his significant others--but he loves leaving his readers on the edge of our seats. Like Shakespeare at the end of Measure for Measure--now there’s a classical reference to give noir some respectability. You’re welcome.
Hogdoggin'

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Monday, August 15, 2011

GUEST POST - CARL BRUSH

Hi folks,
A treat today--two reviews by my friend Carl Brush. One on my new novel, JUST LIKE THAT, and another on YELLOW MEDICINE, a brilliant noir novel by Anthony Neil Smith. Carl doesn't normally read noir, but I'd recommended YELLOW MEDICINE to him as a great example of another writer's techniques in writing flashbacks. Here's Carl's take on both:


WRITER WORKING
CARL R BRUSH


TAKE YOUR YELLOW MEDICINE
ALONG WITH YOUR YELLOW SNOW

If you ever wondered what noir fiction was, you’ll find the definition
in Anthony Neil Smith’s e-/paperback-book, Yellow Medicine. Start with the protagonist. Deputy sheriff Billy Lafitte is not just flawed. He’s a doofus. Impulsive. Doesn’t think ahead. When he’s intent on bonking someone, he usually fails to check behind him to see if someone else is about to bonk him. All this costs people injury, money, even lives. Still, you root for him. Why, I’m not sure. Maybe because always trying somehow to do the right thing even though he goes about it in every possible wrong--legal or illegal--way imaginable.
The action centers around some terrorists who are moving in on the meth trade in rural Minnesota. Lafitte considers both the geography and the drug traffic his territory. He’s got paid informants inside the labs, tries to keep things under control even if he roams outside of what’s strictly legal to do so. He’s had the same kind of history in his previous law enforcement gig on Gulf Coast. He crossed a few too many lines during Katrina, taking payoffs from the rich and delivering them to the poor. Even blowing away a gangbanger in the process. All this costs him wife, kids, job. He gets a second chance via a brother-in-law sheriff in Minnesota and he ‘s doing his best to make the best of it. Trouble is, his best isn’t so hot.
Instead of teaming up with colleagues to take the terrorists out (He doesn’t know they’re Al Quaeda at first.) He tries to take care of everything in his characteristically improvisational and lame-brained manner. Add to this the fact that he has a penchant for jumping the bones of every female he can--whether they’re witnesses or criminals or whatever--and you have a bundle of dangerous messes. Add to that a vengeful FBI guy who is convinced that Billy is not just a bungler but a terrorist himself, and you have witch’s brew. There’s so much violence and blood--beheadings, burnings, dismemberments (by the terrorists as well as by Billy)—and grotesque sex that “noir” doesn’t begin to describe how dark the tale
gets. Not quite a horror story, but close.
I’m not sure I can say I liked Yellow Medicine, but I was fascinated throughout. And Smith’s flashback techniques are masterful, which is one of the main reasons Les Edgerton recommended it to me and that aspect paid off because I used some of them them as a model in my rewrite of my The Second Vendetta (I’ll let you know when you can look for it on Kindle, etc.) Not only that, I just started reading the Yellow Medicine sequel--Hotdoggin’.
Poor Billy Lafitte. But this time, I have a feeling that vengeful FBI guy is going to get his, and it’s going to be oh, so ugly.

And then, Carl's take on my novel:
writer working
carl r brush
    Since Les Edgerton is not only a mentor but a friend of mine, let there be no pretense of objectivity here. Writer Working regulars know that I usually link up to a bio the first time I mention a writer’s name in one of these commentaries. Here, though, you have to read the book. That’s the bio that matters. Just Like That is, he says, more than 80% autobiographical, though he gives only a peek at what is and isn’t fiction in the intro.
    What is real is a look into the criminal world.  Not just a peep show, either.
  

Just Like that opens with a couple of ex-cons on a road trip.  they travel from Indiana to Louisiana in a picaresque adventure, flexing their freedom, fighting and stealing as they go. Nothing serious, just to get along. Here’s where we start to understand a little of what goes on between the ears of outlaws. Actually, we begin to realize that we don’t understand at all. We get a brief look, like at a passing train. We don’t understand because they don’t either, and they don’t spend much time reflecting about it. Early on, Jake goes into a convenience store for the same reason everyone else does--pick up a few supplies. A couple of fairly insignificant things happen, and he suddenly adjourns to his car, where he grabs his pistol, walks back in, robs the place. Even threatens to blow a little boy’s kneecap if he doesn’t obey his mother. Why? He doesn’t know. He could use the cash, sure, but there’s not much of that. He has no plan about before, after, or during. Just does it.
    I’m reminded of the character Richie Nix in Elmore Leonard’s Killshot (see Writer working, July 25) who shoots and robs on impulse. Something rang true to me about Richie. Les’s Jake, drawn from his own experience, seems to confirm that truth. Most of these crimes are the product of unplanned, indiscriminate action. Look for plot, planning, goals, you’re looking for something you won’t find.
    Just Like That doesn’t stay on the road, though. It migrates to the most unpicaresque environment imaginable--the penitentiary. Jake has recidivist buds there, and they engage in a number of survivalist actions that, unlike most of their actions “on the bricks [outside], do take some planning and plotting. Enthralling reading. Lean and mean, unscented and unflowered prose.
    The characters--especially Jake--do engage in some reflection here. He even reads and rereads Moby Dick. He delivers a couple very instructive rants about how much you can trust the veracity of Hollywood’s version of prison life (Hint: Not at all.) [There are a couple of puzzling repetitions of these. Bad editing? Making sure the reader gets the point? Dunno.]
Jakes musings also include lots of contemplation of relationships--hetero-, homo-, undefinable-sexual.
  Two of the points I hadn’t thought about--a big reason for the dearth of true inside info--MSNBC’s wall-to-wall Lockup included--about prisons are, first, so many hard-core inmates are semi-literate that they couldn’t write true accounts if they wanted to. Which they don’t. Second, they’re never going to tell a camera or a reporter what they tell their colleagues. They’ll proclaim their innocence to the ends of the earth if you ask them. If their cellmate asks them? Fuckin’ A I did it, and a lot more. and it was fun.
    And so is Just Like That fun. And scary. To be able to run around the world with that kind of abandon. Even us regular citizens love the idea. If we had the guts. Or the idiocy. Or whatever it takes. Just Like That does have what it takes.
    Kindle book. Amazon. Don’t have a Kindle? You can download it to your PC or Mac. Les will tell you how on his Lesedgertononwriting blog. And/or  he’ll personally instruct you at your house. And bring the beer. Of course, as he reminds us, he does write fiction.

Writer Working signing off. You’re on your own.


Stone House Inklings: Character Monday: An Interview with Les Edgerton

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Sunday, August 14, 2011

Friday, August 12, 2011

REMINDER!

ANOTHER UPDATE! IT JUST WENT UP ANOTHER 10K IN HALF AN HOUR!

UPDATE! Just checked my sales status and in an hour Just Like That went up over 30,000 places! You guys rock!

LAST UPDATE: Overall, you wonderful folks caused my sales status to move nearly 60,000 places. Hugs for each and every one of you. I'm completely humbled and honored by your kindness.


Hi folks,
Just a reminder for those who plan to buy my new novel JUST LIKE THAT tomorrow at 10 am EST.

Here’s some handy-dandy links:



3. For those who don’t have a Kindle and want to get a FREE desktop Kindle, go to: http://www.amazon.com/gp/help/customer/display.html?nodeId=200388510 and just follow the directions. Takes 1-3 minutes!

4. For those who have the NOOK, here's the link: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/just-like-that-les-edgerton/1104729414

Also, if you would, please click on the Like button and click on the “Yes” button below each review that asks “Was this review helpful to you?”

And, if anyone posts a review, I’ll come over to your house personally to thank you and I’ll bring the beer… (Remember, I’m a fiction writer…)

Thanks to everyone who helps me out. I can’t tell you how much your support means to me!

Blue skies,
Les

Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Criminal-E: Les Edgerton interview: Just Like That

Criminal-E: Les Edgerton interview: Just Like That: "Just Like That by Les Edgerton £3.50/$4.99 Amazon UK , Amazon US Les Edgerton is an ex-con who was a writer even when he was robbing folk..."